Oblivious12's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Basic techno (BooBlock)]

The pause at the beginning scared me for a sec

At first I thought "Oh god, silence"
Then the song got started.
Very good, if you can make it longer and add a few more drums, it'll be even better!

BooBlock responds:

Oh, Thank you! :)
The song wasn't meant to be like a full song it was just test but many people have liked it...

[Rayun - Mi Cariño]

iFantastico!

Excellent song! Well done! This song has excellent progression - it builds like a good song should. Keep up the good work!

MiLink responds:

Thank you very much :)

[Solaris [with lazers]]

Doesn't clash right

For some reason, the arcade-style synth, the guitar, and the drums, don't quite mesh and the entire track sounds very confused. Whats more, the Synth and the Guitar seem to be competing for your attention in the song.
My Advice: keep the guitar as a background instrument, have the synth lead.

MashedByMachines responds:

Well that is the point of this genre, i guess that if you are not used to it, it can seem confusing at times.

[Dream Glider (ACINO)]

Small improvements would make a big difference

Its a good song, but you could have started it a lot better. The song shows good progression, but the first few seconds are totally disconnected from the rest. Try making the whoosh sound a little longer, reaching further into the beginning.
Also, add a little bit more drums. A LITTLE bit more drums. as in a crash at your transitions from one segment of the song to the next.

ACINO responds:

Thanks for advices!:) And yes youre right:D It would be simple to edit it but im too lazy to post again:D But i will do that in future:) thanks:)

[DJ YouKraine - Dust]

Catches you at the beginning, and holds on

Well done loop that shows a lot of potential for inclusion in a larger piece. Keep it up!

You-Kraine responds:

thanks!

[|ZiNiTY| magical wonderland.]

Good, but can get better.

This song is well-done, however, increase the levels on your drum kits just a tad.
I like the simplicity of this song, and I'd like it even more if the drums were washed out.

Zinitymusic responds:

okay! i will give it a try :)